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Genre-hip hop urban.Surburban streets and underground match the streetwise feel to the song.the ambulance signifies danger and trouble which is also common to hip hop smoking and groups of people (and no one looks very happy).

Relationships-ej's part would be more believable if it was synchd up proply
.the "we think your a joke" goes to a kind of taunting shot with the group on the stairs.

Editing- love the pivot shot begining at 00.08 , love the shot of efa and the crew on the stairs.

Mise en scene- good quality editing, 1.27 love the bit with the leaves with layered shot underneath.black and white with patched colour is very good and effective and interesting.

Special effects-liked the effects of the only colour being on her face as worked well the black and white emphasised the different artist...rapper didnt over use the effects.

Maz.